Jeevan ke panne par
Likh diya mera hi naam tumne
Apna naam likha hota toh lagta
Kar diya hai saara intezaam tumne.
Teri likhawat mein apna naam bhi
Kuch alag sa nazar aata hai
Hai kya wahi pehchaan wakai meri
Chehra jo teri aakhon mein nazar aata hai
Mujhme ‘mera’ kya hai nahi janti
Khud mein ‘main’ kahan hun, nahi pehchanti
Par haan, kabhi kabhi teri aankhon mein
Khud ko dekh paayi hun main
Likh kuch nahi paayi ab tak
Us naam ke neeche bas ek
Lakeer kheech aayi hun main….
Sweksha
13.10.08
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oh wow!!! beauty!! such perfect union... makes em almost jealous of itself!! I have felt this before with certain poems (to be unnamed!!) ... and it takes a very powerful poem to evoke this feeling...
ReplyDeleteyours also reminds me a li'l bit of my "you have grown into me"
beauty...pure beauty is just what comes to my mind...
ReplyDeleteI simply loved it wen i read it for d first tym n cant help loving it over n over again...
khoobsoorat...
ReplyDeletebas 1 soch :: mujhe lagta hai ke ap last stanza ko break kar ke and 1 line aur add kar ke 2 stanza bana sakte ho.. that would look more perfect as a poem..
ye bas meri 1 soch hai.. hindi kavita ki takneeki batein mujhe zyada pata nahi..
GOD BLESS YOU.. and keep writing